Without a warning
Without a path
Path through the garden
Path poorly paved
Paved with bricks
Paved in haste
Haste makes waste
Haste moves along
Along the path
Along the river
River so deep
River so cool
Cool it down
Cool your jets
Jets overhead
Jets fly low
Low to the ground
Lowly mouse
Mouse in the house
Mouse runs fast
Fast little hummingbird
Fast flies past
Past the garden
Past the house
House built stout
House built strong
Strong enough
Strong to survive
Survive the winter
Survive to see
See the spring
See this place
Place your hand
Place on my heart
Heart and flower
Heart and hand
Hand to God
Hand to me
Me to you
Me, I sigh
Sigh so soft
Sigh my love
Love this life
Love you too
Too much thinking
Too little too late
Late in the evening
Late and great
Great
Evening
Oh wow. I really love this, B.
ReplyDeleteThanks :) it's called a blitz poem
ReplyDeleteI wish I'd done one of these. Sigh! I'm running out of time.
DeleteSo interesting what emerges from these experiments with form.
ReplyDeleteThis is truly wonderful.
ReplyDeleteWow.
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